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Post by Satori Ryuutei on Wed Mar 14, 2018 9:20 pm


Childhood:

Who are you?

Name: Satori Ryuutei 悟り滝亭
Meaning: Sudden Enlightenment under the Waterfall Pavilion.
Age: 14
Birthday: 07/28
Bloodline: Ryuutei
Gender: Male
Sexual preference: Pansexual

What can you do?

Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Rank: D, Genin
Element(s): Earth, Water, Lightning
Stats:

  • Strength: 100
  • Speed: 100
  • Endurance: 100
  • Perception: 100
  • Chakra: 653

Traits:
Positive Traits:
Name: Chakra Resistant
Type: Positive
Description: A person with this trait is naturally resistant to chakra, and as such, any time they would take damage from chakra, that damage is reduced by 1.

Name: Tough Skin [Found Here]
Type: Positive
Description: A person with this trait is naturally resistant to normal physical damage, and as such, any time they would take damage from a physical blow [ie. Punch, Sword Slash, etc], that damage is reduced by 1.

Name: Power House
Type: Positive
Description: Someone with this trait has excessively powerful chakra, and as such all damage techniques receive a +1 to their damage.

Negative Traits:
Name: Penny Scrapper
Type: Negative
Description: For whatever reason, this person has a hard time putting two pieces of ryo together. Those who have this trait receive 20% less ryo from missions, and items cost 10% more.

Name: Jutsu Inept v2 [Found Here]
Type: Negative
Description: For whatever reason, those with this trait find themselves having a hard time mastering and crafting new jutsu. For this reason upon character creation, they receive none of the jutsu they were supposed to. If the character is an Academy Student, then they don't gain the free jutsu they would normally acquire on graduation to Genin rank.

Name: Chakra Shotgun
Type: Negative
Description: Someone with this trait naturally is better at close with their jutsu. As such, all of their techniques may receive a -1 in range.

What do you look like?

Height: 6'8" (203 cm)
Weight: 266 lb's (120 kg)
Hair: Black
Eyes: Red
General appearance: Satori is a monster of a young man, just by his height alone he is far above the average size, especially considering his age. This is due to his Ryuutei blood, having nearly hit complete physical maturity at incredibly young as all Ryuutei males do. Towering over most adults, Satori has begun rapidly filling out his large frame, with broad shoulds and defined muscle coating him from head to toe it makes it quite clear the man is naturally gifted with a superior body, which has then been honed by years of dedicated training. Matching this height, he holds extremely long limbs with large hands and feet, in order to make room for the long claws that decorate his fingertips and toes, making his large body that much more intimidating.

When it comes to his actual facial structure, Satori's face is angled and sharp completely having lost any and all baby fat despite his age. His jaw is pointed, and angled along a sharp jawline. Similarly, due to having now reached true adulthood within his clan, Satori is capable of growing facial hair, but he doesn't allow it to grow. Unlike his father, he keeps his face clean shaven and has had his eyebrows medically removed by his mother for ease of day to day activities, finding facial hair itchy. Instead, he holds his clan's ceremonial piercings decorating along his eyebrows, ears, tongue, lip, and nose. His lips are full, and almost effeminate until he draws them back in an excited, feral grin.

Matching the grin, Satori's teeth are straight and aligned due to his clans traditions and skills ensuring he retains good health, along with his genetics causing his teeth to be as strong as they are, his primary cuspids being an inch longer than they normally should be, angled to mold properly to the rest of his teeth. Similarly, the molar and incisor on either side of his primary cuspids are instead pointed into cuspids as well, amplifying his feral appearance when he smiles. Finally, coming to his eyes and hair, Satori holds brilliant crimson eyes with vertical, feline-like pupils. His hair is pitch black, wild, and full of curls and waves that he rarely ever bothers to properly maintain beyond cleaning it or the occasional brushing, letting it grow to the backs of his thighs now, which considering his height is an expansive mass of hair.

His clothing tends to be fairly standard shinobi wear, with sandals and a pair of simple black shorts or pants, finished with a simple mesh sleeveless shirt. Occasionally he'll wear a blue hoodie overtop it, but generally, he doesn't bother and simply concerns himself with being covered enough not to be yelled at for being "unsightly", and having his weaponry with him. As is common he wears a pouch on either thigh and two on his belt along with his back in order to minimalize risk of his limbs hitting it while being mobile. He wears his headband around his forehead in the normal fashion, though his wild mane tends to swallow up most of it.

Getting to know you.

Personality: Satori is a fairly simple individual, but that's not to be confused with stupidity by any means. Raised by his clan, he embodies many of their traditions and see's no issue with much that the world offers. When it comes to general interactions with others, Satori is surprisingly firm in his patriotism. To him, Kirigakure is his home, his family, and they are the only ones that matter. He doesn't care about the other villages or civilians ruled by other lands. This idea that only family matters has been hammered into him from the beginning of his life, as it is a key aspect of how the Ryuutei Clan has managed to survive as long as they have and obtain as much power as they have. Due to these teachings, Satori is very much a logical mind that doesn't overcomplicate things or worry too much about consequences, instead simply accepting responsibility and moving on.

For a young man, he is overwhelmingly mature and calm, philosophical and surprisingly down to earth. This is due to never having been spoiled by his family, and he holds great pride in the symbol he wears on his arm. The teachings of his family have hardened the man, as in order to gain a name within the clan one must kill another. Satori has already killed countless animals and several enemy ninjas as his right of passage with his clan. As such, he holds a firm understanding of life and death and sticks closely to the beliefs of his people with an almost unnerving stubbornness. Despite this, he is not nearly as heartless as some within his clan or village and see's no issue with being kind to civilians, especially of those within the land of water.

Protecting the people, helping them, and doing what he can to ensure they are safe being some of the most important aspects of his duty in his eyes. He gains strength for his family and his village, and that is all the motivation that he needs. This shows another aspect of Satori's mentality, that being his overwhelmingly potent willpower and determination. A single-minded mindset based on his people that, combined with his near zealotry and combat skill makes him the perfect personality for, essentially a warlord that cares for his people. This same mentality sticks to those that join him, as even if they were originally an enemy, as long as they have renounced their old ways and joined him then he will forgive and protect them just as he would those born in his homeland.

Kind, and yet dangerous, philosophical and eager to learn, and yet simple-minded and straightforward, the man is a mixed bag and in a single word: simple. He doesn't try to be anything he isn't, is as content sleeping int he dirt as he is a bed, and worries for those around him far more than he does himself. In the end, he is a young warlord in the making that believes in strength, and the natural laws of nature, life, death, and never wasting any resource much as his clan. As well as of course, a natural bloodlust that all of his clan have, making them as potent at physical combat as they are.

Likes: Satori tends to enjoy many simple things in life, reading books, fighting, training, cooking, and hunting are all very frequent pass-times for the man. Often he will spend his time trying to better himself, or hunt in order to get his food, never really concerned with the idea of buying anything from the supermarkets and instead content to make weaponry all on his own. Effectively, if it's something he can do with his hands or something to better himself, Satori will generally enjoy doing it.

Dislikes: Satori has a tremendous dislike for several things, specifically based on unwarranted cruelty. Actions such as killing civilians for no reason, or killing enemies that have surrendered, bothers him quite a bit. Similarly, he tends to dislike those that try to press their views or beliefs on him, such as criticizing his clan's traditions. He doesn't insult or question others choices, and so he doesn't expect anyone else to do the same to him.

Fears/Phobia: Though Satori has few fears, the most notable would be that he hates the idea of dying without a purpose, he wants to ensure that when he dies it's for the betterment of the village and his family. Losing those connections, or disappointing those he is connected to, are some of the strongest fears and one of his most potent drives as a shinobi. It is what pushes him, to ensure that the fears never come true, to the point of unhealthy obsession.

Ideals/Motivations: Attached fairly strongly to the above-mentioned fears and general personality, Satori's motivations are simple and effective. He wants to become stronger for his village, his country, and home and believes strongly in the "natural ways of life". This means that even if he wishes to protect civilians, if they die, then that is the way of nature and there is nothing he can do about it but try to save another, or kill the one that caused the death. He believes strongly in a twisted sense of honor, in taking revenge to appease the spirits of the dead, and to uphold the natural way of things. These are all powerful ideas, and if, for instance, he saw someone utilizing the dead for their own means he would become enraged at the disrespect.

This is also a key part of why his people use the bodies of those they kill, to ensure that their souls can rest in peace. Satori following these concepts has a single key motivator and goal connected to it, and that is to become Mizukage. To wield kindly, but sternly, and to make Kirigakure the most powerful nation in the world. Eventually even wishing to conquer the other lands in order to bring them into the fold, and spread the ideals of strength and the natural way of life. Due to this goal, Satori has an obsession with growing stronger, constantly training and pushing himself, and without hesitation throwing himself into the thick of battle without any concern for what damage he may suffer due to it.

Prideful, yet respectful with a great ambition and will, Satori wishes to protect all he cares for and do so by any means necessary without hesitation. A brilliant, shining, simple star that knows what it wishes to do and will do everything in its power to ensure that it happens.

History: Satori was born to a young man named Kiyoshi Ryuutei, and a young woman married into the clan, Raika Ryuutei during the period of time when the Ryuutei had finally settled, and were starting to work toward the idea of joining the other groups forming a village in the future, Kirigakure. Like many boys born into the clan, Satori was not given a name when he was born, and instead was given the number sixteen, as the sixteenth male of that generation. Like many males that struggled to endure the chakra within them, Satori was born growing used to bouts of intense pain as his own chakra tried to kill him every minute, of every day. However, through a force of will to live and being blessed with a strong body and genetics, Satori managed to survive his first trial through life and managed to reach the age of one. It was at this point that he was formally accepted into the family, though still only going by a number as was common, he would not gain a name until he entered his clan's version of adulthood.

Raised within the Ryuutei Clan, Satori was brought up in the rough and realist world of the clan, raised with the idea that the clan and village were everything that mattered. He was taught from a young age, language, and the basics of being a shinobi from his father and his three mothers along with his two twin sisters and one brother, though he had originally had another brother the boy had been stillborn. Tutored by his mothers, and taken out on hunts and taught how to skin, gut, and cook by his father, Satori grew up what many would consider a privileged life. However, there were rules in the Ryuutei household, and one was that they all had to pull their weight no matter how young. From a young age, Satori had responsibility hammered into him, if he could walk he would help carry supplies for the adults.

If he couldn't move any longer, he would sit and prepare food so that the adults could cook it, skinning potatoes, cleaning rice, boiling water, skinning animals and more were all common things that he was to do. Cleaning as well, as he was placed in charge of his own room. When Satori turned six, he was taken out on his first true hunt, and his father began teaching him the basics of stealth, tracking, and how to smell chakra as was customary of his clan. It was here, that Satori began to shine as even among his clan, he wasn't obviously talented, nor was he overly intelligent. But he had another weapon, and that was his obsession.

When other children went back home to prepare to go to bed, certainly having earned it, but not enough for Satori, the boy would remain in the forest. Hunting, tracking, killing and skinning. He would spend most of his time in the forest, only returning home to handle his responsibilities and often even sleeping out in the trees. This eventually became noticed by the elders, who showed their respect and interest by granting the boy a special right at a surprisingly young age, the chance to earn his ceremonial piercings should he pass his first trial into adulthood. At the age of eight, Satori was stripped naked and told to survive within the forest on his own for a month, and so the boy did.

Using his knowledge, claws, and teeth, he hunted and gathered, killed and gutted. He created his own clothing from those that he killed, and each time took the remains he could not use and placed them in a pile that he would be certain to bring back to add to the fertilizer piles at the clans home. By the time the month had passed, and Satori returned dragging the remains behind him, wielding tools of sharpened bone and stone, he had been awarded his first reward. However, even as the bone needles pierced into his skin and his eyebrows were seared from his flesh, Satori was not satisfied. This obsession continued to drive the boy forward, to the point that he even began requesting that his parents allow him to attend the Academy atop his home studies.

Usually, Ryuutei would simply learn at home and hammer the knowledge into them before going straight to Genin, but Satoshi didn't want to learn just his clan's techniques. He wanted to build upon them, he wanted to learn everything he could and evolve his clans jutsu even further, and with a slight uncertainty, his parents approved of his actions. However, in order to join the Academy the child needed a name, and as such he would have to perform the final ritual to obtain his sacred individuality in the eyes of the clan. Due to this, his joining was put off until his father had captured an enemy shinobi from a mission and obtained permission to use the woman for his clan's rituals.

This ritual was simple, the boy was to kill the woman using only his bare hands. Normally, the woman would be allowed to rest in order to show proof, but considering the boy's age this rule was waived, and instead, he was placed in the arena with the woman chained to the earth so she couldn't flee. Satori had hunted much of his life, killed animals, and understood the laws of nature. However, he had never truly fought another human being, and that was this test. Launching at her, the boy surprised everyone, once more not because of some tremendous talent, but because of his ruthless obsession to kill, to win.

He was knocked down constantly, suffering multiple broken bones, and yet despite it all, his tenacity won the day as his teeth sank into the woman's throat. Barehanded, he had killed the woman, and as he stood on the grassy plain, staring down at the bloody corpse Satori felt something different from when he had hunted animals. This was true death, and as he watched the intelligence, the emotions, the life drain from the woman's eyes he felt something stir inside him. An epiphany of sorts, as the laws of nature finally clicked in the boys mind, on why he had attacked, hunted, and killed. On what he wanted to truly do, on why he wanted power.

When they asked him his name, a single response was all the boy gave.

"Satori." Sudden enlightenment, a fitting name, and as the boys eyes focused on the elders own, they saw a fire within the blood-covered child that made them shiver. There was something within this boy, and it wasn't a natural talent or incredible intellect. Nor was it something as simple as "good genetics", no, the boys most potent weapon was his determination, his obsession, and his charisma. Dragging the corpse behind him, without hesitation beginning the butchering, the adults could only beam proudly at the child that had been born to their clan, and so Satori became an adult within the eyes of the clan at only the age of nine.

The next day, he began attending the Academy, and the bloody, brutal, and single-minded story of Satori Ryuutei began. He was determined to shake Kirigakure to its very core, no matter what cost it came to him personally.

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Re: Satori Ryuutei

Post by Tetsuji on Thu Mar 15, 2018 2:20 pm

So, I can't approve this just yet (until the bloodline is approved and those details are sorted) however, I'll comment through what's here and applicable as it is~

On your stats, your actual speed is still 0. So you'd just Speed: 0 (+50) or something like that. Passives aren't part of the base just on top of that.

Small history detail, Kiri is only 9 years old by this timeline (give or take) but to have been born within the village it would be stretching that just a small bit.

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Post by Satori Ryuutei on Thu Mar 15, 2018 7:28 pm

Salute.

Thank you, edits are made, I won't post another request until the bloodline is handled. Appreciate it!
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Post by Kyoshi on Tue Mar 27, 2018 1:44 pm

Traits: You can only take each trait once, so you'll have to replace that second penny scraper with something else. Furthermore, One of those should be unbalanced as per the bloodline. Which means that bare minimum in positives you need Power House and in negatives you need Penny Scrapper. Any on top of that need to be evenly balanced. As it stands right now, you have 3 positives (on top of the base one) and 2 negatives (on top of the base one). Also, the passive trait doesn't link to anything and I think that has since been replaced by your bloodline anyway.

Other than that, looks good!

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Post by Satori Ryuutei on Tue Mar 27, 2018 2:11 pm

Fixed.
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Post by Tetsuji on Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:35 pm

Original App:

Who are you?

Name: Satori Ryuutei 悟り滝亭
Meaning: Sudden Enlightenment under the Waterfall Pavilion.
Age: 10
Birthday: 07/28
Bloodline: Ryuutei
Gender: Male
Sexual preference: Pansexual

What can you do?

Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Rank: E, Academy Student
Element(s): Earth
Stats:

  • Strength: 0
  • Speed: 0
  • Endurance: 0
  • Perception: 0
  • Chakra: 10

Traits:
Positive Traits:
Name: Chakra Resistant
Type: Positive
Description: A person with this trait is naturally resistant to chakra, and as such, any time they would take damage from chakra, that damage is reduced by 1.

Name: Tough Skin [Found Here]
Type: Positive
Description: A person with this trait is naturally resistant to normal physical damage, and as such, any time they would take damage from a physical blow [ie. Punch, Sword Slash, etc], that damage is reduced by 1.

Name: Power House
Type: Positive
Description: Someone with this trait has excessively powerful chakra, and as such all damage techniques receive a +1 to their damage.

Negative Traits:
Name: Penny Scrapper
Type: Negative
Description: For whatever reason, this person has a hard time putting two pieces of ryo together. Those who have this trait receive 20% less ryo from missions, and items cost 10% more.

Name: Jutsu Inept v2 [Found Here]
Type: Negative
Description: For whatever reason, those with this trait find themselves having a hard time mastering and crafting new jutsu. For this reason upon character creation, they receive none of the jutsu they were supposed to. If the character is an Academy Student, then they don't gain the free jutsu they would normally acquire on graduation to Genin rank.

Name: Chakra Shotgun
Type: Negative
Description: Someone with this trait naturally is better at close with their jutsu. As such, all of their techniques may receive a -1 in range.

What do you look like?

Height: 5'5" (165 cm)
Weight: 129 lb's (58 kg)
Hair: Black
Eyes: Red
General appearance: Satori is a monster of a young boy, just by his height alone he is far above the average size, especially considering the boy hasn't hit puberty yet and despite this is taller than many girls that already have. His height, however, is about all he has at the moment, as he hasn't quite filled out properly to match his size. The boy is lanky and lean, with defined muscle but not much of it decorating his frame. Matching this height, he holds extremely long limbs with large hands and feet signaling how much larger he will eventually grow atop that. Long claws decorate his fingertips and toes, making his large body that much more intimidating.

When it comes to his actual facial structure, Satori's face is angled and sharp already, lacking the usual roundness that most children tend to have. His jaw is pointed, and angled along a sharp jawline, though his cheeks still have some of the so-called "baby-fat" it's clear that it won't last long due to the body's natural metabolism. Similarly, matching his clan's traditions he lacks any and all facial hair but his eyelashes, including a lack of eyebrows. Instead, he holds his clan's ceremonial piercings decorating along his eyebrows, ears, tongue, lip, and nose. His lips are full, and almost effeminate until he draws them back in an excited, feral grin.

Matching the grin, Satori's teeth are straight and aligned due to his clans wealth ensuring he retains good health, along with his genetics causing his teeth to be as strong as they are, his primary cuspids being an inch longer than they normally should be, angled to mold properly to the rest of his teeth. Similarly, the molar and incisor on either side of his primary cuspids are instead pointed into cuspids as well, amplifying his feral appearance when he smiles. Finally, coming to his eyes and hair, Satori holds brilliant crimson eyes with vertical, feline-like pupils. His hair is pitch black, wild, and full of curls and waves that he rarely ever bothers to properly maintain beyond cleaning it or the occasional brushing, letting it grow to the middle of his back.

His clothing tends to be fairly standard shinobi wear, with sandals and a pair of simple black shorts, finished with a simple mesh sleeveless shirt. Occasionally he'll wear a blue hoodie overtop it, but generally, he doesn't bother and simply concerns himself with being covered enough not to be yelled at for being "unsightly", and having his weaponry with him. As is common he wears a pouch on either thigh and two on his belt along with his back in order to minimalize risk of his limbs hitting it while being mobile.

Getting to know you.

Personality: Satori is a fairly simple individual, but that's not to be confused with stupidity by any means. Raised by his clan, he embodies many of their traditions and see's no issue with much that the world offers. When it comes to general interactions with others, Satori is surprisingly firm in his patriotism. To him, Kirigakure is his home, his family, and they are the only ones that matter. He doesn't care about the other villages or civilians ruled by other lands. This idea that only family matters has been hammered into him from the beginning of his life, as it is a key aspect of how the Ryuutei Clan has managed to survive as long as they have and obtain as much power as they have. Due to these teachings, Satori is very much a logical mind that doesn't overcomplicate things or worry too much about consequences, instead simply accepting responsibility and moving on.

For a child, he is overwhelmingly mature and calm, philosophical and surprisingly down to earth. This is due to never having been spoiled by his family, and he holds great pride in the symbol he wears on his arm. The teachings of his family have hardened the boy, as in order to gain a name within the clan one must kill another. Satori has already killed countless animals and several enemy ninjas as his right of passage with his clan. As such, he holds a firm understanding of life and death and sticks closely to the beliefs of his people with an almost unnerving stubbornness. Despite this, he is not nearly as heartless as some within his clan or village and see's no issue with being kind to civilians, especially of those within the land of water.

Protecting the people, helping them, and doing what he can to ensure they are safe being some of the most important aspects of his duty in his eyes. He gains strength for his family and his village, and that is all the motivation that he needs. This shows another aspect of Satori's mentality, that being his overwhelmingly potent willpower and determination. A single-minded mindset based on his people that, combined with his near zealotry and combat skill makes him the perfect personality for, essentially a warlord that cares for his people. This same mentality sticks to those that join him, as even if they were originally an enemy, as long as they have renounced their old ways and joined him then he will forgive and protect them just as he would those born in his homeland.

Kind, and yet dangerous, philosophical and eager to learn, and yet simple-minded and straightforward, the boy is a mixed bag and in a single word: simple. He doesn't try to be anything he isn't, is as content sleeping int he dirt as he is a bed, and worries for those around him far more than he does himself. In the end, he is a young warlord in the making that believes in strength, and the natural laws of nature, life, death, and never wasting any resource much as his clan. As well as of course, a natural bloodlust that all of his clan have, making them as potent at physical combat as they are.

Likes: Satori tends to enjoy many simple things in life, reading books, fighting, training, cooking, and hunting are all very frequent pass-times for the boy. Often he will spend his time trying to better himself, or hunt in order to get his food, never really concerned with the idea of buying anything from the supermarkets and instead content to make weaponry all on his own. Effectively, if it's something he can do with his hands or something to better himself, Satori will generally enjoy doing it.

Dislikes: Satori has a tremendous dislike for several things, specifically based on unwarranted cruelty. Actions such as killing civilians for no reason, or killing enemies that have surrendered, bothers him quite a bit. Similarly, he tends to dislike those that try to press their views or beliefs on him, such as criticizing his clan's traditions. He doesn't insult or question others choices, and so he doesn't expect anyone else to do the same to him.

Fears/Phobia: Though Satori has few fears, the most notable would be that he hates the idea of dying without a purpose, he wants to ensure that when he dies it's for the betterment of the village and his family. Losing those connections, or disappointing those he is connected to, are some of the strongest fears and one of his most potent drives as a shinobi. It is what pushes him, to ensure that the fears never come true, to the point of unhealthy obsession.

Ideals/Motivations: Attached fairly strongly to the above-mentioned fears and general personality, Satori's motivations are simple and effective. He wants to become stronger for his village, his country, and home and believes strongly in the "natural ways of life". This means that even if he wishes to protect civilians, if they die, then that is the way of nature and there is nothing he can do about it but try to save another, or kill the one that caused the death. He believes strongly in a twisted sense of honor, in taking revenge to appease the spirits of the dead, and to uphold the natural way of things. These are all powerful ideas, and if, for instance, he saw someone utilizing the dead for their own means he would become enraged at the disrespect.

This is also a key part of why his people use the bodies of those they kill, to ensure that their souls can rest in peace. Satori following these concepts has a single key motivator and goal connected to it, and that is to become Mizukage. To wield kindly, but sternly, and to make Kirigakure the most powerful nation in the world. Eventually even wishing to conquer the other lands in order to bring them into the fold, and spread the ideals of strength and the natural way of life. Due to this goal, Satori has an obsession with growing stronger, constantly training and pushing himself, and without hesitation throwing himself into the thick of battle without any concern for what damage he may suffer due to it.

Prideful, yet respectful with a great ambition and will, Satori wishes to protect all he cares for and do so by any means necessary without hesitation. A brilliant, shining, simple star that knows what it wishes to do and will do everything in its power to ensure that it happens.

Clan Information, Purely Asthetic Lore:


Ryuutei 滝亭
(Waterfall Pavilion)

Name: Ryuutei

History: The Ryuutei Clan are a clan known for their destructive force, military tactics, and bloodthirsty behavior. Naturals when it comes to slaughter, and well known for having overwhelmingly potent emotions they are originated in the Land of Water. Hundreds of years ago, the Ryuutei were just another fight-hungry group. However after an interaction with a Bijuu, and the removal of part of its body the beast escaped. However, the resulting chunk of flesh was then devoured, as was the custom in the savage clan with any great beast.

However, this time was different, and as the Bijuu chakra flooded into the Ryuutei it altered them and burned into their bodies and chakra network. The result was a rampage as the Ryuutei, enhanced with Bijuu chakra, tore into the landside. From this point forward, the clan became known for their rage, destructive potency, and feral nature that having the beast's chakra inside them caused. The chakra transferred from one generation to the next, the children burning with the same feral nature and prowess but without a body designed to properly endure the chakra, and no "inner beast" to make a pact with properly.

Seen as a useful weapon for their combat capabilities and raw chakra nature, the Ryuutei were accepted into Kirigakure after its founding and became one of its strongest initial members. The result was effectively making the clan into one of the more potent weapons of Kirigakure, and granted them a substantial section of land in the country where they were allowed to train their young as they wished with their brutal, and bloody methods required in order to endure the cloak of their people. They are now well known for their brutal power, efficiency in combat, and bloodthirsty nature as well as being well known for having multiple wives, though the reason is kept secret.

  • Physical Traits: Males have long canines, claws on both toes and fingers that can retract and extend like a feline. Generally, dark hair colors varying from black to brown, with curly and wild patterns, usually extremely thick like the pelt of an animal. Eyes are generally feline in nature, holding vertical pupils and tend to be red, yellow, or green. Generally, males are born with extremely large builds, and average at six foot four inches, with the tallest being over seven feet tall. Females tend to have the same colored eyes and hair, but without the feline traits, they lack claws and elongated canines as well, generally being of more petite builds and average human heights.

    Similarly, Male Ryuutei tends to hit puberty at a much younger age, and have an escalated growth rate. Normal males tend to completely finish growing from eighteen to twenty-one on average, however, Ryuutei males tend to finish growing by the age of sixteen to eighteen. Generally, this means that when other children are just starting to enter puberty, Ryuutei are already physically in their late teens. This does slightly shorten their average life expectancy, but only by a few years generally and for Shinobi such things rarely matter. Often due to the care of the medical shinobi in the family, it matters even less as they live such healthy lifestyles.

  • Culture: In many ways, the Ryuutei are incredibly forward thinking, and yet in many others they are not. The reason for this is that sex has a tremendous regulation within the clan as a whole, due to only males inheriting the Bijuu chakra because of their stronger physical forms are able to endure it unlike the females of the clan. This, however, comes at a substantial trade-off. As males may hold greater chakra and raw power with ferocious physical capabilities and savagery, they also constantly harm themselves and due to their chakra are unable to ever utilize actual medical jutsu. This led to many initial deaths in the clan and caused the roles within it to shift based on the phenomenon.

    As females lacked the chakra, they were expected to learn Medical Jutus from a young age, as their minds were often more focused they were expected to handle the things that the males struggled with now such as finances, documentation, and proper education. Due to this, the females became tacticians, librarians, teachers, and doctors while the men became front-line fighters, cooks, manual labor, and cleaners. In an odd way, despite the fact that males and females were effectively "forced" into these positions because it was not out of a thought of superiority, there was never any issues as it was all for the betterment of the clan.

    Women are not looked down upon, and in fact are respected for the work that they perform and often find themselves as the head of the clan, or parts of its high council due to their knowledge of tactics. Women are allowed to become warriors, if they so desire, but are expected to put in the tremendous effort if they wish to deviate from the normal path of women because they are effectively weakening the other half of the clan doing so. Similarly, if a male wishes to become a teacher or tactician that is also allowed but frowned even more on due to how few males tend to survive birth and must truly prove their worth.

    Another noteworthy point is that though only males can inherit the Bijuu chakra, even they only have a fifty percent chance of proper survival from birth as their bodies can still be born weaker than normal for a male. Due to this, the clan has nearly gone extinct several times purely because their male children were stillborn. This amplified the clans need for the women to become medics, and more than that, caused an alteration in the culture of the clan itself so that multiple women per male is incredibly common within the clan. It's not unusual at all for a male to have two to four wives, that all live together relatively happily within a single home.

    Similarly, stillbirth is not something that is nearly as emotionally stunting within the clan as it is so commonplace, and due to this children are rarely seen as "loved" until they reach the age of a year and have gotten past the danger zone. Male children due to this, do not have names and are instead given numbers to go by until they reach maturity and earn their name through an action that they have performed. Due to this, males names are incredibly sacred within the clan, as it to them represents that you managed to survive not only birth but the rough childhood of being nameless and enduring tremendous training.

  • Notable Traditions: A single tradition within the clan is simply that killing is not to be taken lightly, and that should one kill, all resources of the body must be used properly. This comes from their ancient beliefs that led to the osmosis of Bijuu chakra to begin with, and the tribal traditions are still clung to today. This rule includes the battlefield, and the Ryuutei are often seen as savages for their "Battlefield Feasts", being willing to cannibalize other humans that they have killed and use their bones for weaponry, their skin for material, and the leftovers for fertilizer in their farms.

    Similarly, the clan doesn't care about age or sex when it comes to adulthood. Instead, in order to become an adult, it comes in two forms as a staged test. The first is that the child must live in the forest without being given any weapons or supplies at all, bare naked for a month living entirely off the land starting from nothing. On completion of this, the child is required to return with all clothing, weapons, materials, and leftovers from their kills so that the clan can make use of them all. With this, they are given bone piercings that decorate their eyebrows, lips, ears, and nose. This allows them to be considered an adult, allowing them to be considered "legal" as it were, but not a standing member of the clan to participate in meetings, own land, and so forth.

    Instead, comes from having to kill a human opponent in battle, neither of them can be armed or wearing anything and are chained to the ground so that escape and tactics are impossible beyond basic physical feints and similar actions. Anything goes, and once they defeat the opponent they must kill them while looking into their eyes, and then butcher and eat them while turning the remains into useful tools. This is generally how the Ryuutei's first true weapon of their choice is made and signifies them as true clan members that can claim wives or husbands, as well as own property.

Requirements: All Ryuutei must be either Kirigakure Shinobi or Missing Kirigakrue Shinobi.

History: Satori was born roughly a decade ago to a young man named Kiyoshi Ryuutei, and a young woman married into the clan, Raika Ryuutei during the period of time when the Ryuutei had finally settled, and were starting to work toward the idea of joining the other groups forming a village in the future, Kirigakure. Like many boys born into the clan, Satori was not given a name when he was born, and instead was given the number sixteen, as the sixteenth male of that generation. Like many males that struggled to endure the chakra within them, Satori was born growing used to bouts of intense pain as his own chakra tried to kill him every minute, of every day. However, through a force of will to live and being blessed with a strong body and genetics, Satori managed to survive his first trial through life and managed to reach the age of one. It was at this point that he was formally accepted into the family, though still only going by a number as was common, he would not gain a name until he entered his clan's version of adulthood.

Raised within the Ryuutei Clan, Satori was brought up in the rough and realist world of the clan, raised with the idea that the clan and village were everything that mattered. He was taught from a young age, language, and the basics of being a shinobi from his father and his three mothers along with his two twin sisters and one brother, though he had originally had another brother the boy had been stillborn. Tutored by his mothers, and taken out on hunts and taught how to skin, gut, and cook by his father, Satori grew up what many would consider a privileged life. However, there were rules in the Ryuutei household, and one was that they all had to pull their weight no matter how young. From a young age, Satori had responsibility hammered into him, if he could walk he would help carry supplies for the adults.

If he couldn't move any longer, he would sit and prepare food so that the adults could cook it, skinning potatoes, cleaning rice, boiling water, skinning animals and more were all common things that he was to do. Cleaning as well, as he was placed in charge of his own room. When Satori turned six, he was taken out on his first true hunt, and his father began teaching him the basics of stealth, tracking, and how to smell chakra as was customary of his clan. It was here, that Satori began to shine as even among his clan, he wasn't obviously talented, nor was he overly intelligent. But he had another weapon, and that was his obsession.

When other children went back home to prepare to go to bed, certainly having earned it, but not enough for Satori, the boy would remain in the forest. Hunting, tracking, killing and skinning. He would spend most of his time in the forest, only returning home to handle his responsibilities and often even sleeping out in the trees. This eventually became noticed by the elders, who showed their respect and interest by granting the boy a special right at a surprisingly young age, the chance to earn his ceremonial piercings should he pass his first trial into adulthood. At the age of eight, Satori was stripped naked and told to survive within the forest on his own for a month, and so the boy did.

Using his knowledge, claws, and teeth, he hunted and gathered, killed and gutted. He created his own clothing from those that he killed, and each time took the remains he could not use and placed them in a pile that he would be certain to bring back to add to the fertilizer piles at the clans home. By the time the month had passed, and Satori returned dragging the remains behind him, wielding tools of sharpened bone and stone, he had been awarded his first reward. However, even as the bone needles pierced into his skin and his eyebrows were seared from his flesh, Satori was not satisfied. This obsession continued to drive the boy forward, to the point that he even began requesting that his parents allow him to attend the Academy atop his home studies.

Usually, Ryuutei would simply learn at home and hammer the knowledge into them before going straight to Genin, but Satoshi didn't want to learn just his clan's techniques. He wanted to build upon them, he wanted to learn everything he could and evolve his clans jutsu even further, and with a slight uncertainty, his parents approved of his actions. However, in order to join the Academy the child needed a name, and as such he would have to perform the final ritual to obtain his sacred individuality in the eyes of the clan. Due to this, his joining was put off until his father had captured an enemy shinobi from a mission and obtained permission to use the woman for his clan's rituals.

This ritual was simple, the boy was to kill the woman using only his bare hands. Normally, the woman would be allowed to rest in order to show proof, but considering the boy's age this rule was waived, and instead, he was placed in the arena with the woman chained to the earth so she couldn't flee. Satori had hunted much of his life, killed animals, and understood the laws of nature. However, he had never truly fought another human being, and that was this test. Launching at her, the boy surprised everyone, once more not because of some tremendous talent, but because of his ruthless obsession to kill, to win.

He was knocked down constantly, suffering multiple broken bones, and yet despite it all, his tenacity won the day as his teeth sank into the woman's throat. Barehanded, he had killed the woman, and as he stood on the grassy plain, staring down at the bloody corpse Satori felt something different from when he had hunted animals. This was true death, and as he watched the intelligence, the emotions, the life drain from the woman's eyes he felt something stir inside him. An epiphany of sorts, as the laws of nature finally clicked in the boys mind, on why he had attacked, hunted, and killed. On what he wanted to truly do, on why he wanted power.

When they asked him his name, a single response was all the boy gave.

"Satori." Sudden enlightenment, a fitting name, and as the boys eyes focused on the elders own, they saw a fire within the blood-covered child that made them shiver. There was something within this boy, and it wasn't a natural talent or incredible intellect. Nor was it something as simple as "good genetics", no, the boys most potent weapon was his determination, his obsession, and his charisma. Dragging the corpse behind him, without hesitation beginning the butchering, the adults could only beam proudly at the child that had been born to their clan, and so Satori became an adult within the eyes of the clan at only the age of nine.

The next day, he began attending the Academy, and the bloody, brutal, and single-minded story of Satori Ryuutei began. He was determined to shake Kirigakure to its very core, no matter what cost it came to him personally.

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Re: Satori Ryuutei

Post by Kyoshi on Sun Apr 08, 2018 5:37 pm

Only issue with this is that under rank you have "C, Genin". A Genin would be D-Rank, not C. So either remove the C or replace it.

Other than that, looks good.

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