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Name: Akane, Kosuke
Clan: MAGNET RELEASE CLAN (Jiton [Magnet Sand - Steel Sand])
Age: 22
Birthday: July 15
Gender: Male
Sexual preference: Heterosexual


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Village: Kumogakure
Rank: A-rank
Traits:  
Positive:
Name: Specialization Prodigy
Type: Positive
Description: This Trait often belongs to people who are naturally talented at a certain specialization (must be labeled in the Trait). Those with this trait receive 2 spec points (count towards overall total) that must be allocated to the given specialization upon character creation, as well as a free jutsu of the rank of the specialization. Furthermore any justu cast within the chosen specialization cost 5 less chakra to activate.
Negative:
Name: Penny Scrapper
Type: Negative
Description: For whatever reason, this person has a hard time putting two pieces of ryo together. Those who have this trait receive 20% less ryo from missions, and items cost 10% more.
           


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Height: 5'11"
Weight: 163 Lbs.
Hair: Black
Eyes: Bright Blue
General appearance: Kosuke is a rather handsome young lad, with black hair and eyes to match the color of sapphire, he is one who is described as easy on the eyes by most that he meets. He is around average height for his age, standing at around 5’11”. He is well built from his years of strenuous exorcise. He usually keeps a blank mask of indifference around people he doesn’t know, but around those he does, he is very cheerful. He is often seen wearing a black, high collar, short-sleeved shirt with the Kumo village symbol on the back. This is accompanied by black pants that seem to have many pockets for scrolls and weapons. He wears black ninja sandals and ties his headband around his neck. His hair is medium length and very wild and unruly. He has two long bangs that frame his face, these come down to his shoulders. He sometimes wears a light beige hooded cloak to keep the cool or rain off of him, he prefers the sunlight, as made evident by his slightly tanned skin. He sometimes wears a white high collar open front shirt with a black sash holding it together. This has a small cloud crest on the back just below the collar. He wears this with his black pants as well. His body is littered with small scars in various places, such as arms, chest, abdomen and back. These are from a lifetime of fighting and training intensely. His hands are covered by black fingerless gloves and his feet themselves are wrapped in white bandages to his mid-calf.


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Personality: Kosuke is a complex person, having many different ways that he goes about things. He leads a relatively unroutine life, always changing things up and doing things differently, he hates the monotony that life can become once it gets stagnant. As such, he leads a flexible lifestyle, moving with the flow of the river of life. He has grown much more cynical since his childhood, as such, he doesn't trust easy, but once he does trust you, he will do so wholeheartedly. He believes that almost everyone he meets is only motivated by their own self interest and only helps others in hopes to garner a favor for themselves. Though, he recognizes there are exceptions to this rule, as there always are. He doesn't mind interacting with others though and is tolerant of those who may disagree with him. He places knowledge and honesty at the height of his core values and those who would be dishonest to their comrades or who would seek the destruction of knowledge are worse than scum in his book. As he holds these things to such high regard, he is often seen as cold and apathetic, though most people who truly get to know him, are aware that he can be a very personable person and never fails to hold a decent conversation. Once you get him talking, it's getting him to shut up that's the trick. Finally, are the traits only observable to those who truly know him on a deep, intimate level. They see that at times, when he gets serious, he is apathetic, turning off his emotions to give himself a much clearer train of thought. Not even he is sure where he learned to do this, but he got it down pat. He uses this to bring forth his logical and calculative traits, this is usually during missions going south or fights. He looks for the most logical path to take and does his best to predict any outcomes or variables, his opponents moves, the different paths a fight or whatever could take. He is definitely a planner, but, should tings no go to his plan, he is stubborn enough to pursue them anyways. His hard head definitely runs down his family line, but he may have it worst of all.

Likes/Dislikes: Kosuke enjoys learning new things and training to gain strength. He finds knowledge to be power, but he also finds power to be power. He wishes to be as best as he can be in both of those areas. With his mindset being competition against himself rather than those around him. He dislikes those who come across as weak willed or weak minded. He also dislikes those who prey on the weak for their own gain. His dislike of those who do not push themselves to be stronger is perhaps the highest of all, as the trait in a person he most admires is tenacity and determination. He absolutely hates those who rely on others to do everything for them without showing any want or desire to attempt to improve or help themselves. He has no room for tolerance of this and will not accept it in any of his allies.

Fears/Phobia’s: Kosuke is afraid of nothing more than dying without leaving behind a legacy. He wants nothing more than to leave behind something or someone who can or will carry on his name and making his mark on the world. He does all he can to be strong so as to influence the world and be in a better position to leave his mark on the world, he also seeks to gain an heir to his name, someone to carry on his blood as well as his legacy, someone to teach his techniques to and all others. A deeper thought behind his fear is that should he die before he can pass on his collective strength to another who shares his ideals, it will lead to the downfall of the village. He loves the village above all else and wants to see it survive well past his lifetime. Also, he is afraid of spiders.

Ideals and motivations: Kosuke has a high level of expectation for both himself and those he is associated with. He wishes for Kumogakure to be the best village in the world, and wants himself to be the best defender of his village he can be. As such, he holds himself to a high standard and any other Kumo-nin to higher standards as well. Any ninja placed in his squad or in his chain of command are also looked at to uphold a higher level of functionality than those of other villages or affiliations. His goals for the future are obviously to create his own family line and to be the best he can be for his village.

History: Kosuke was born to Sashimi and Tatami Akane on the night of July 15th. It was a cloudless night in the Land of Water with a big full moon, the land was dark except for the small camp built by the clan. The family was rejoicing with the birth of their latest member. He was well taken care of and raised to put the clan first and anything else second. But his older brother told him that the clan could lead him to corruption and that he should set his sights on finding precious people and protecting all of them instead of just letting the clan dictate his life. His brother would later die during a mission due to being betrayed by one of his teammates. After the eve of his 4th birthday he was started with learning the basic curriculum in the ways of the shinobi as taught by the clan and the other stragglers who travelled with them. He showed great promise in the general principals and rules of the shinobi way. Then at the age of 6 he was forced to move as after his brothers death his family could not handle living in the Land of Water and would move to the Land of Lightning in order to allow Kosuke to grow up without being constantly reminded of his brothers premature death. After packing their belongings and heading out of the Land of Water, the small family of three made their way to lightning country.

After arriving in the Land of Lightning and finding a good place to settle down, they would begin to build a home among the mountains. By the time Kosuke was 8, his father began to teach him more advanced practices in regards to the shinobi way. After he unlocked his chakra and began to learn the required jutsu his father had made him learn, he also started to learn his element of wind that is common in select members of his clan. He showed a great proficiency in wind manipulation. He was taught techniques that his father deemed necessary and useful for all shinobi to have mastered. After he managed to master these techniques his father considered him worthy of the title, shinobi. Their once small family had grown, with other wanderers stopping and joining them, becoming honorary clan members over the time spent helping around the ever expanding compound. It was with these people that Kosuke would form his first team, placed on a team with Miki Fukushima and Daiki Minami under the sensei Hideki Kobayashi. After being placed on a team he immediately began to grow stronger based off of the rivalry and camaraderie he and his teammates built. Miki had the dream to become a Ninjutsu master and was a bit on the loud boisterous side. While Daiki wanted to become a powerful shinobi and was kind and giving always looking out for what was best for the team rather than himself. Their sensei Hideki merely wanted peace and friendship, he saw a bright future ahead of all three Genin.

After around two years of training the three Genin were sent on a B-Ranked mission into foreign territory to test their skills. At first it was a simple Intel gathering mission, but that quickly changed when they were caught in one of the many bandit bases due to Miki not noticing a barrier seal that was placed on the floor. It alerted all of the shinobi present and their sensei told them to escape with the Intel while he held off the shinobi. After running through numerous hallways Kosuke noticed that heir sensei wasn’t coming back as he could see some shinobi looking for them. They tried to run but Daiki was caught in a hail of kunai after the shinobi saw them. This ended up killing him as neither Kosuke nor Miki couldn’t pull him away in time. But they knew they had to run, so they held back their horror and grief in order to survive. As they made it back into the surrounding forest they knew they were still being pursued by the enemy and as such they ran as fast as they could until a group of enemies appeared ahead of them to block their path as they were then surrounded. Kosuke knew that this would be their final moments so he began to think of the clan and his brother who died serving the village. Then Miki looked at him and said to run and threw down a smoke bomb and then randomly began to throw explosive notes in order to distract the enemy shinobi.

As Kosuke ran he knew that the amount of notes thrown would kill all shinobi in the area, including Miki. As he made it back across the Lightning country borders, he looked back and saw the smoke rising meaning that the explosions ha claimed his friends life. As he made it back into the village by himself he felt as if the weight of the world was upon his shoulders. Returning from his first high ranked mission by himself with no hope of any of them coming back truly tore his heart and soul to shreds. He knew that he had to report to the his father to get the mission debriefing underway. After explaining the whole story to him, he was granted the rank of Chuunin among the clan and given the ability to take solo missions. From then on for 5 years he only took solo missions from C-ranked to A-ranked and he began to distance himself from his friends. He seemed to be on the path towards deserting the clan and was losing himself to the grief of not being able to protect those precious to him. He was almost lost until he met a new friend by the name of Fumijo who showed him that instead of mourning over his friends and being guilt stricken he needed to gain strength and make their dreams his own. He didn’t take what Fumijo said to heart but the two remained friends and training partners. Kosuke continued to take high risk missions only now he had Fumijo helping him. After he had finally met the mission requirements for promotion to Jounin he was told that as a Jounin not only did he have a responsibility to the clan and all of its people, he had a responsibility to preserve the future of this land that had adopted them as well, in any way possible.

After a year of being Jounin he decided that he would take Fumijo’s advice to heart and would fight for the dreams of all of his deceased friends. His brother, Miki, Daiki, and Hideki-sensei. He would become the embodiment of all of their dreams in order to bring true, lasting peace to the shinobi world. He began to train to be a Ninjutsu master, he decided to become the most powerful ninja in his village and to use that position to not only bring peace and safety to his own clan but also to bring peace to the Land of Lightning as well. After a couple years of training he had truly mastered the art of Ninjutsu and could boast a good array of various Ninjutsu. He continued to take high cost missions in order to bolster his strength. His relationship with Fumiko had grown and the two were like brothers now. Kosuke is often busy with training or missions but he does make time to see his family as they were the only thing keeping him sane and in the right frame of mind when he was still overcome by grief. He knew that to become the best he would need to acquire a large amount of power and also gain political support to bring true peace to the shinobi world. He had an amazing vision for the future and he would fight for it to his dying breath. As he trained more and more jutsu and even obtained a weapon he began to notice that he was gaining power but still lacked the prestige, so he decided that he would use every opportunity he had to get close to higher ranking officials in every nation. He had yet to accomplish this goal but knew that one day he would make a name for himself somehow.

He had begun to entertain the idea of forming an organization in which they would attempt to get all five nations to agree to a peace treaty, this was proving to be difficult however as he lacked both the funds and the potential members so this thought went on the back burners, but still remained at the back of his mind in case he would gain an opportunity to put it into motion. To Kosuke his ultimate goal of bringing peace went past his love for his village. He would always care for and protect the fledgling village of Kumo, but if need be he would leave the village to pursue peace and prosperity in the world. He found the shinobi way to be nothing but bloodshed and violence. But to him, if he had to add more bloodshed and violence to end the wars and fighting he would. He knew that hate begat more hate and violence leads to more violence, revenge lead to more revenge. So, he decided if he and anyone else who agreed with him could take all the hate of the world onto their shoulders and could focus all of the nations on collectively hating them then they would stop fighting and would align if only for long enough for him to try to get them into a permanent alliance.

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Post by Miyuki on Sat May 25, 2019 10:04 pm

This looks really good. Just a couple things to tweak and it'll be good to go. The Likes/Dislikes and Fears/Phobias sections need their word count increased (since you're applying at A-Rank).

Also I cannot approve this until your Clan is approved, once that's done please repost this in the Character Modding Request thread.

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Post by Eizō on Mon May 27, 2019 8:55 am

So the application is good, there's a few typos I would check (plenty of free spell-checkers you can run it through) but there's a pretty major discrepancy with the history. The villages on our timelines are very new (maybe a year old at most) but you mention being involved with the villages at a young age though your character is now 22. I'm going to have to ask that you rewrite the history to fall closer in line with the established lore/timeline (of course, the timeline doesn't have to be absolutely perfect but a 15+ year discrepancy is too much). If you have any questions, feel free to send me a PM or send a message in the Help Desk of discord and a staff member will be sure to help you out~
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